Persuasive Writitng By Liana

Task Description: Yesterday Rm 12 did some Persuasive Writing. Persuasive basically means trying to make someone do something or trying to convince them. I put some thought into it and I decided to write about why we should have seperate schools for sport. Do you agree or disagree with my statment?

 

Persuasive Writing  06.09.23

Why we should have separate schools where we only learn sport. 

(So we don’t have to play sports in ordinary schools)

 

Firstly, in my opinion I think it is better to be good at sports rather than academics because if you think about it athletes get paid about 362K – 680K per season and the highest paying academic job 

(which is a Family Medicine Residency Program Director) 

Gets paid about 220K – 307.5K yearly. 

 

Secondly, not only is an athlete higher paid but it is also a fun job and a way to keep fit. I mean, your basically getting paid for playing sports. You also don’t have to worry about being unfit because it is your job to stay fit for sports (obviously). 

 

Last but not least, sports also helps you organize your time, boosts your friendships with your teammates and helps you build good relationships with your peers and adults Another reason is cause sports could help with real life situations like for instance a kidnapper approaches you you could easily beat them up because you are good at taekwondo which also counts as a sport.

 

In conclusion I think that it is important to be good at sports and something that is a good thing to do in your free time rather than laying in bed all day. 

(which I do unfortunately)

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